Essay

上個禮拜我寫的essay, 老師今天唸出來, 老師說雖然分數不是最高的, 但是很有意思.

One day, when i am ninety years old, maybe i will be the oldest guy in my family. All of my relatives will care for me everyday because they will be affraid that one day i will not wake up in the morning.
When my grandsons see me, they will cry because the wrinkles will be everywhere on my face. I will look like a wax man next to a fire. They will not be able to see my eyes because my eyes will be deep and dark, like holes which seem full of experiences and life skills, but can not be revealed.
My son and daughter will see me , they will shed their tears. The tears are as beautiful as pearls because there are love and care in the tears. They will ask me ''How do u feel today?'' i will repond ''i feel good, but my knees are painful. i think it is OK because i am already accustomed the pain.'' They will feel so sad when i tell them i am used to the pain all over my body.
Ninety is a huge number in age, although we can count one to a hundred out loud in about five minutes. But in age, ninety means a life. Facing all of the problems in life, and ultimately the last problem to face is death.

超有成就感!!!!

還有一件事情...今天下午的音樂...我不小心把中提琴 中間的 bridge給摔斷了XD